Let Me Die Away

2009 May 13
by Prabhjot

DIE in Love

 

Let me cut down my nerves, let me die away

My life is getting terrible & I don’t wanna live in this way.

I’m getting restless, my sleep has gone away,

Loneliness is eating me & I’m going through a severe pain.

I can’t live in this way…

So I want to cut down my nerves, So I want to die away

As my life is getting terrible & I don’t wanna live in this way.

 

Baby why do you come to my life? Why you became a good friend of mine?

When you have to pretend in this way, as if we don’t know each other in any way.

 

Just tell me why are you doing all this with me?

Baby let me know of my sins….

 

Searching for an answer, I walk the streets all the days

My life is getting terrible & I don’t wanna live in this way

So let me cut down my nerves, Let me die away

I really can’t live in this way…

 

Looking up, all the time, I’m waiting for a shooting star in the sky

So that I can make a wish, So that I can get you back in my life.

 

But the god is showing no mercy to me,

Instead he is just turning up things even harder for me.

 Things are getting more & more terrible in my life,

And that’s why I think it would be better if I die.

So let me cut down my nerves, let me die away

As I can’t live in this way…

 

Baby I swear, I really love you from bottom of my heart

I can even do anything for you, to show how much I really love you.

 

Holding up my hands in front of you, bending down on to my knees

I’m just begging one thing from you, Please don’t do all this with me.

As I can’t really bear any more pain.

 

I really want to cut down my nerves, I really want to die away

My life is getting terrible & I can’t live in this way

Let me cut down my nerves, Let me die away

Bcoz I can’t live without you, I really can’t live in this way

Let me die away….

 

“May God Bless U”

By- Prabhjot Singh

21 Responses leave one →
  1. 2009 May 15

    :O Awesome…!!! poem full of love and pain…. and u wrote with ur Heart… *claps*

  2. 2009 May 15

    @Khushi,
    Thanks a ton!

  3. 2009 May 29

    hi..prabhjot….its a vry vry tuching poem…but y so much pain…is it real or fiction….????

    take care…;-)

  4. 2009 May 30

    @Dreaming Eyes,
    Hi!
    First of all thanks for your appreciation.
    “Why so pain?”-Becz it’s a simple funda without pain how will u gain. :)
    “Real or fiction?”- Hmm.. that’s the diffucult 1 to answer….. just joking. :)

    Take Cr.

  5. 2009 May 30

    Heart touching prose….!!!

    Time changes everything….wait & see how it does the twist..!!!

    • 2009 June 1

      @Thoughtful Delights,
      Thanks.
      Hmm.. let’s see upto what extent, it can change up the things.
      -Just Kidding- :)

  6. 2009 June 6

    Quite a powerful piece..Lot of turbulence and chaos..
    Loved it!Keep penning!

  7. 2009 June 8
    RISHIT ARORA permalink

    Khatarnak poem!!!
    oyeee…engineering chod aur poet ban jaa ;)

  8. 2009 June 8

    @Rishit Arora,
    Hmm, but i damn sure Ram Gopal Verma ki movies se toh zada khatarnak toh nahi hogi!
    Anyway thnks for not only commenting but also suggesting me a carrier!
    :)

  9. 2009 June 13
    ABHI permalink

    dude,dint kno you had an other side or alter ego or wateva :|
    bout em poems …hmm i cud relate to em is all i can say…. :|
    btw i 2 write such stuff….but at a varied level i mite add [:)]

    • 2009 June 14

      @ABHI,
      May be it will sound u little bit absurd, but to be very frank i’ll say that i didn’t get exactly wht u were trying to say.

      Nyway still thnks! Afterall u commented! :)

  10. 2009 June 15
    ABHI(ABHISHEK :x) permalink

    ^^^^
    lmao,,do i need 2 decipher me :o

    • 2009 June 16

      @Abhishek,
      Nahi sir, u don’t worry i got it in the real sense now.. :)

      Actually i myself was also unaware of it. :)

  11. 2009 June 16

    i am speechless.. I am feeling that may be we are in the same position.. my condition is same to ur poem..

    u are a very good writer.. *claps*

    Priceless..

  12. 2009 June 16

    @Lonesome Zombie,
    My friend it’s my honour that you liked my work.
    I hope that everything in ur life will come back onto the track very soon, so don’t loose hope.

    May God Bless U! :)

  13. 2009 June 16

    Wow!!! awesome piece…..you really have a way with words buddy.

  14. 2009 June 17

    thanks for the soothing words prabjot.. hoping to get back my life.. tc.. bye

  15. 2009 June 21
    Divya permalink

    hey prabhjot ds one is really gud

  16. 2009 June 23

    @Divya,
    Thanks. :)

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