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Let Me Die Away

DIE in Love

 

Let me cut down my nerves, let me die away

My life is getting terrible & I don’t wanna live in this way.

I’m getting restless, my sleep has gone away,

Loneliness is eating me & I’m going through a severe pain.

I can’t live in this way…

So I want to cut down my nerves, So I want to die away

As my life is getting terrible & I don’t wanna live in this way.

 

Baby why do you come to my life? Why you became a good friend of mine?

When you have to pretend in this way, as if we don’t know each other in any way.

 

Just tell me why are you doing all this with me?

Baby let me know of my sins….

 

Searching for an answer, I walk the streets all the days

My life is getting terrible & I don’t wanna live in this way

So let me cut down my nerves, Let me die away

I really can’t live in this way…

 

Looking up, all the time, I’m waiting for a shooting star in the sky

So that I can make a wish, So that I can get you back in my life.

 

But the god is showing no mercy to me,

Instead he is just turning up things even harder for me.

 Things are getting more & more terrible in my life,

And that’s why I think it would be better if I die.

So let me cut down my nerves, let me die away

As I can’t live in this way…

 

Baby I swear, I really love you from bottom of my heart

I can even do anything for you, to show how much I really love you.

 

Holding up my hands in front of you, bending down on to my knees

I’m just begging one thing from you, Please don’t do all this with me.

As I can’t really bear any more pain.

 

I really want to cut down my nerves, I really want to die away

My life is getting terrible & I can’t live in this way

Let me cut down my nerves, Let me die away

Bcoz I can’t live without you, I really can’t live in this way

Let me die away….

 

“May God Bless U”

By- Prabhjot Singh

  1. May 15, 2009 at 11:29 am | #1

    :O Awesome…!!! poem full of love and pain…. and u wrote with ur Heart… *claps*

  2. May 15, 2009 at 4:25 pm | #2

    @Khushi,
    Thanks a ton!

  3. May 29, 2009 at 12:27 am | #3

    hi..prabhjot….its a vry vry tuching poem…but y so much pain…is it real or fiction….????

    take care…;-)

  4. May 30, 2009 at 7:54 am | #4

    @Dreaming Eyes,
    Hi!
    First of all thanks for your appreciation.
    “Why so pain?”-Becz it’s a simple funda without pain how will u gain. :)
    “Real or fiction?”- Hmm.. that’s the diffucult 1 to answer….. just joking. :)

    Take Cr.

  5. May 30, 2009 at 3:15 pm | #5

    Heart touching prose….!!!

    Time changes everything….wait & see how it does the twist..!!!

    • June 1, 2009 at 12:09 pm | #6

      @Thoughtful Delights,
      Thanks.
      Hmm.. let’s see upto what extent, it can change up the things.
      -Just Kidding- :)

  6. June 6, 2009 at 1:06 pm | #7

    Quite a powerful piece..Lot of turbulence and chaos..
    Loved it!Keep penning!

    • June 7, 2009 at 11:56 am | #8

      @Incognito,
      Good to see that you have loved it!
      Thanks!

  7. RISHIT ARORA
    June 8, 2009 at 7:22 pm | #9

    Khatarnak poem!!!
    oyeee…engineering chod aur poet ban jaa ;)

  8. June 8, 2009 at 7:28 pm | #10

    @Rishit Arora,
    Hmm, but i damn sure Ram Gopal Verma ki movies se toh zada khatarnak toh nahi hogi!
    Anyway thnks for not only commenting but also suggesting me a carrier! :)

  9. ABHI
    June 13, 2009 at 8:14 pm | #11

    dude,dint kno you had an other side or alter ego or wateva :|
    bout em poems …hmm i cud relate to em is all i can say…. :|
    btw i 2 write such stuff….but at a varied level i mite add [:)]

    • June 14, 2009 at 1:04 pm | #12

      @ABHI,
      May be it will sound u little bit absurd, but to be very frank i’ll say that i didn’t get exactly wht u were trying to say.

      Nyway still thnks! Afterall u commented! :)

  10. ABHI(ABHISHEK :x)
    June 15, 2009 at 7:21 pm | #13

    ^^^^
    lmao,,do i need 2 decipher me :o

    • June 16, 2009 at 8:52 pm | #14

      @Abhishek,
      Nahi sir, u don’t worry i got it in the real sense now.. :)

      Actually i myself was also unaware of it. :)

  11. June 16, 2009 at 4:57 pm | #15

    i am speechless.. I am feeling that may be we are in the same position.. my condition is same to ur poem..

    u are a very good writer.. *claps*

    Priceless..

  12. June 16, 2009 at 5:43 pm | #16

    @Lonesome Zombie,
    My friend it’s my honour that you liked my work.
    I hope that everything in ur life will come back onto the track very soon, so don’t loose hope.

    May God Bless U! :)

  13. June 16, 2009 at 9:57 pm | #17

    Wow!!! awesome piece…..you really have a way with words buddy.

  14. June 17, 2009 at 5:51 pm | #19

    thanks for the soothing words prabjot.. hoping to get back my life.. tc.. bye

  15. Divya
    June 21, 2009 at 4:21 pm | #20

    hey prabhjot ds one is really gud

  16. June 23, 2009 at 8:33 pm | #21

    @Divya,
    Thanks. :)

  17. June 23, 2009 at 3:09 pm | #22

    @Divya,
    Thanks.
    :)

  18. prabhjot
    June 18, 2009 at 1:37 am | #23

    @Lonesome Zombie,
    Ur welcome! :)

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